Thursday, 2 August 2012

story success

WritersBillboard.net have for the second time selected a short story of mine as a winner. This time, Do It Yourself (DIY), a dark tale about taking matters into your own hands.





Previously WritersBillboard.net selected 'Rough Justice' as winner in March. Some of you will remember the story about the killing of the evil Captain Clive.

Three winning stories this year so far

I have been busy with preparing my manuscript, 'Hero on a Honda - Reflections of India'. I will today send it to the publishers in the US for their scrutiny.

All very exciting, not to mention the London Olympics!

Tuesday, 3 July 2012

Who Did Kill Captain Clive?

Please note:

Readers of Rough Justice have asked me who killed Captain Clive. Several readers enquired following web publication of the story on WRITERSBILLBOARD in April 2012

Though the story is based on a true recollection of my Aunt who was a born and grew up in India, the murder is  a fiction; even I don't know who killed the vile captain.

 

Please read the story, read  it again if necessary and tell me who you think might have killed Captain Clive? There are several obvious contenders who have alibis but........

 

You can leave a comment at the end of the blog page; you may have to sign-up to follow the blog.

I'd be fascinated to hear your suggestions. I'll consider expanding the story into a full length text, a novel maybe and I'd be happy to give you an acknowledgement.

 

Rough Justice

Two young Hindi boys ambled along the dusty path towards the river. Each carried a galvanised steel bucket swinging with the rhythm of their stride. They chatted and laughed about a boy at school who was afraid of ghosts and rarely ventured outside after dark. As they approached the river the path widened and they saw a man with a peaked cap on horse-back leaning forward encouraging his horse to drink from the river. The boys knew the man, everyone knew the camp commander known without affection as Captain Clive. They and the villagers and workers at the camp knew of his mistreatment of local people and his violence towards women. Instinctively they hung back, crouched down, speechless in the grass beside the path hoping not to be discovered.

 

The horse paused from drinking, turned its head and looked in the direction of the boys, its ears alerted by their approach. The Captain shifted in his saddle and followed the horse’s gaze. It was a big horse. It shook its head back and forth, jingling the bridle. The day was hotting up; the air was perfectly still, only the sound from the horse’s bridle and the chattering sparkle of the water in the river disturbed the tableau.

 

Just then the boys heard a crack like a twig snapping, only much louder; a rifle shot. The Captain heard it too. As he swung round in the direction where the boys were hiding, he suddenly stopped, swung back the other way and tumbled, spiralling out of the saddle. He didn’t fall off because the heel of his shiny black boot jammed in the stirrup so he half hung, without falling to the ground. His peaked cap landed in the water and began to drift down stream. The horse made a whinnying sound and took a few steps sideways dragging the Captain with him, then stopped turned and looked straight at the boys as if seeking for explanation or assistance. The boys could see the wound in the captain’s head just above his ear; blood flowed freely and mingled with the water and sand, the sleeve of his khaki shirt turned black as it soaked up the river water.

 

The two boys were transfixed by the scene. They knew something terrible had happened but they had no idea what to do; they sat on their haunches, eyes wide open, staring at the scene ahead of them. They knew there would be trouble.

 

‘Should we see if he’s alive?’ whispered one boy, his hand searching for his friend in the space between them, his eyes fixed on the horse.

 

‘No, we should get away as fast as we can. People will be coming. We shouldn’t be seen here!’ replied the other. A dog barked somewhere close and broke the silence.

 

‘C’mon, let’s go, quick!’

 

The two boys upped and ran back the way they had come, arms flailing, legs pumping, their threadbare shirts flapping; the two empty buckets remained in the dry grass.

 

At the parade ground Captain Clive walked beside Champion holding the bridle, occasionally looking up at young Mary Ann. She looked down at him, at his polished bald head, at the new crowns in his epaulettes glistening in the warming sun and his shadow marching beside him. She was content to sit holding the pommel swaying from side to side with the slow gait of the horse. Mary Ann liked riding high up on Champion. She could see over the trees to the low hills in the distance. Above her, vultures patrolled the skies in the clear morning air. She could hear voices from the camp, the trundle of carts, the rattle of harness, the plaintive neighing of an ass and the barking of a dog. The smell of smoke was in the air from many wood fires and soldiers would be gathered for breakfast at the tented barracks. Mary Ann began to think about school.

 

‘Had enough now have you?’ Captain Clive asked as if speaking to a subordinate. He turned the horse towards the stable and increased the pace a little. ‘I expect you’ll want to get school, eh?’

 

‘Yes. I think so, thank you,’ Mary Ann replied. ‘I want to go to school now.’

 

‘Very well, I’ll see you again tomorrow morning.’ The horse came to a standstill. Captain Clive secured the bridle to a post and reached up to Mary Ann allowing his hand to brush her thigh where her skirt had folded back. He clasped both his hands around Mary Ann’s waist.

 

‘Ready now, one, two, and three!’ Mary Ann was lifted clear of the saddle, swung through the air in a wide arc and lowered to the hard dusty ground. Captain Clive bent and straightened the hem of her skirt, brushed dust from her black patent leather shoes. He rose a little breathless, placed both hands on her shoulders. He could feel her collar bone then the heat from her body through the thin cotton of her white blouse.

 

‘We like our morning walks don’t we, you me and Champion, eh?’ He removed his hands from her shoulders and stroked her hair. ‘Did you enjoy your ride, your Royal Highness?’ he jested.

 

‘Yes thank you. One day I’ll have my own horse,’ she replied.

 

He smiled. ‘I’m certain you will, maybe sooner than you think! Don’t forget your satchel.’ He thought how pretty she looked. ‘Off you go then, see you tomorrow, same time, eh?’

 

‘Bye and thank you,’ she called back, already skipping, swinging her satchel as she went, her black hair bobbing up and down. Small puffs of dust splashed with the tread of her shoes on the parched dusty parade ground.

 

Captain Clive continued to watch until she’d disappeared from sight. He stood for a moment remembering her bright face, her freckled cheeks, her clear blue eyes and the warmth of her body through her blouse when he held her. His thoughts lingered before he turned his attention to his horse, adjusting the stirrups, feeling for the habitual point on the straps, worn and light-coloured from habit; each buckle slotted effortlessly into its natural place. He gave his horse a pat on its rump.

 

‘There’s a fine fellow. I expect you’d like a drink from the river, eh?’ The horse turned and looked at him as he reached for his cap, blew off the thin film of dust and dropped it on his head. He took the peak in his right hand and adjusted the fit, centred it, tapped the brim. The new bright crowns on his shoulders reminded him of his recent promotion as he put on his black leather gloves. He walked Champion to the mounting block, mounted, settled his arse in the saddle and rode off at a light canter in the direction of the river, leaving behind the dusty deserted parade ground. He heard the chime of the school bell. He smiled a smile of someone pleased that pieces of a secret plan were falling into place. He stroked his moustaches with the back of his gloved free hand and continued his ride down to the river.

 

Captain Clive, a seasoned India-wallah, commanded the battalion of horse artillery at Shimla and had been promoted recently to Major. He’d always been called ‘Captain Clive’ and among his soldiers he was happy for it to remain so; it showed the softer side of his nature in contrast to his dedication to discipline and order. He was first and always a soldier, proud to serve his country in a foreign field.

 

The Captain considered himself to be a friend of the family. Mary Ann’s father, Sergeant-major Collins had been with the battalion for many years having served throughout North West India. He was a fine soldier but to his commanding officer, he was a man without ambition. Mary Ann walked Champion every morning with the implicit consent of her father. She’ll be fourteen soon and for her birthday the Captain had a big surprise for her. As the day approached he felt mounting excitement, sure that she will be pleased with her present.

 

Sergeant-Major Collins leaned on the gatepost of the picket fence watching his daughter skip off to school. ‘Be a good girl,’ he called after her. She turned and waved. The gesture was received with a mixture of pain and pleasure. Her father knew she was going to the parade ground as she did every morning before school. He knew she would ride that horse. His heart was full of anger and loathing for his superior officer and the hold he had on his daughter, and on him. He felt powerless; no matter which way he thought to intervene, he was unable find a satisfactory approach. Grinding his teeth was the outward manifestation of the dark rage that festered inside him. He turned from the gate, wrestling to suppress the demons he was unable to quell this day, no different from any other day.

 

Alone in the empty house he prepared to go to work. He heard the school bell chime and knew his daughter would be released. Minutes later as he stepped out of the house, he heard the crack of a rifle shot close by, perhaps from the vicinity of the river; a single shot from a rifle. Silence dropped like a lead weighted curtain; only the vultures seemed unaffected as they continued to soar high above the river. He stood for a moment, enveloped by the eerie hush, attempting to place the sound of the shot in a logical place in his mind. He went back into the house to the wardrobe in the bedroom to find his rifle safely locked away. He decided it must have been some accidental firing; the reason would emerge sometime during the course of the day.

 

The investigations that followed the death of Captain Clive proved inconclusive and the event declared ‘misadventure’.

 

 There were people with motives. Sergeant-major Collins was found not guilty: inspection concluded that his rifle had not been fired for several months. Mohan Singh, whose wife had been seduced by the Captain against her will, presented a water-tight alibi. Two Sowars who had made separate complaint against the captain had already left the district and had not been seen since. Soldiers, who had been placed on charge sheets by Captain Clive over the past months, were interviewed and found to be innocent. The commander was buried in the military cemetery with a brief ceremony, attended only by high ranking military and police representatives. The police authorities had done what they could in the circumstances and no-one was charged with the murder.

 

It transpired that Captain Clive left money in his will to Mary Ann who would inherit the sum held in trust until she was twenty-one years of age. Her father however, refused to allow her to receive the money; legal arrangements were made to donate the money when released, to a local charity caring for orphaned children.

 

Sunday, 17 June 2012

Careful what you eat between meals.

I got a bout of ‘the munchies’ late yesterday afternoon. You know, the kind of gnawing that only a certain food can assuage. It must have been four-ish; an afternoon-tea kind of hunger.
The morning and noon had been spent slaving over a keyboard; I needed to get over a certain hill, metaphorically speaking. As is often the case, I missed lunch.

Upon completion of my goal but before the habitual editing, I got up from my chair, stretched, walked over to the French windows and threw them wide open. I was pleasantly surprised to find warm sunshine and the hum of flying insects in the garden.

On the way upstairs to the kitchen of my up-side-down house I considered the available gastronomic alternatives: hot buttered toast and damson jam, an apple and a chunk of Comte, a sour cherry and apricot flapjack, blueberries and a large dollop of crème-fraize, apple pie and vanilla ice-cream. Mmmmm.

I decided on dark chocolate digestive biscuits; yes, that kind of hunger!

While rummaging in the pantry I spied a packet of Californian raisins and attacked the ‘keep fresh re-seal’ strip like someone possessed. Big and juicy, the dark soft fruits hit the button. I popped one in my mouth and thrilled at the sweet smoky sensation. While searching for a bowl, my eye was caught by an unopened packet of KP salted peanuts. (No other brands available) The perfect accompaniment; salty and dry with the sweet and soft of the raisins. I found a bowl, poured in sufficient nuts and raisins and hurried down the stairs to begin editing my piece.

I stumbled on the final turn of the stair and spilled some of my precious cargo.

Annoyed for the delay, I picked up the fallen fruits and eventually settled at my desk to read my work, while licking sticky fingers.

With the editing incomplete, the saltiness had worked up a thirst. I knew I had to make a cup of green tea; fresh and cleansing. As I mounted the bottom step of the stair I saw a raisin that I had not picked up earlier. Without thinking I picked it up in forefinger and thumb, popped it into my mouth and continued up stairs. Anyone would have done the same I imagine.

As I bit repeatedly into the raisin I knew there was something very wrong. I chewed once more then spat the now masticated thing into the palm of my hand. To my horror I was looking at the remains of a recently expired blue-bottle fly; legs and bits of wings and the pussey remains of its blue-black body were clearly visible.

Somehow I managed to get to the kitchen sink before vomiting and afterwards swigged down several litres of water.

Once I had composed myself, I binned the California raisins and vowed  half-heartedly, never to snack between meals again.


Friday, 1 June 2012

A new Short Story




A new short Story.....


A Shirt from Paradise Blue
The sun began to change from a searing white globe to take on yellow and orange as it dipped towards the horizon. Two figures appeared in the distance walking along the wide, sandy beach without apparent purpose, occasionally stopping to examine something on the sand or to touch hands, to walk close together and then apart; a man and a woman. He, tall and dark, she shorter and blond, her hair cut short like a boy’s. They dressed alike in white shirts, khaki shorts and pale blue soft summer hats, shoes in hand. Chatting and laughing they approached. Suddenly the woman stopped, pointed and spoke urgently to her partner. She reached out and took his hand.

‘It is, look. It’s a pile of clothes and things,’ she said cautiously stepped forward, pulling him with her.
They stopped close enough to cast a shadow over the belongings.

‘So it is,’ he replied. They both looked around expecting to see someone on the beach or swimming in the surf. ‘There’re footprints in the sand, look,’ he said unclasping his hand and bending to examine the bare-foot prints.
‘Yes, leading away, along the beach. How curious?’ she said walking around the pile of clothes searching for some clue. ‘They haven’t been here long, look, there’s barely any wind-blown sand on them. Perhaps just a few hours.’

‘Well, there were no cars in the dunes car park when we arrived. I don’t remember seeing any prints in the sand as we walked. Why, you remarked that the beach was totally deserted’. He added, his voice revealing growing doubt. Tom liked things to be in the right place; he was a stickler for detail. ‘Look, here are some more footprints leading up from the sea.’
‘How very strange,’ she answered, looking over to Tom. ‘Should we look and see if there’s any identification, a wallet or something? I don’t suppose it’s the scene of a crime.’

‘We can’t very well not look,’ Tom replied and reached out to lift the hat, revealing black sunglasses, hiding in the shade. He picked them up. ‘Oakleys’. He put the hat on the sand and the glasses in the hat. He lifted the bright beach towel, shook it out and placed it on the sand next to the hat. He looked up along the beach and towards the surf for something, anything that might explain this collection of someone’s things.
Maria bent and picked up the shirt. ‘The shirt has a label From Paradise Blue. I’m sure it’s a man’s shirt.’ She held it up to flap in the wind, then thrust her nose into the garment. ‘Smells, clean.’

Tom picked up the khaki shorts and began to examine the pockets. ‘What have we here?’ he said withdrew his hand. ‘It’s a mobile phone, look.’ He held it up for her to see.
‘That’ll be helpful,’ she added.
He pressed the keypad several times but was unable to open the phone. ‘It’s out of juice!’
She moved closer to him. ‘Yes, but it’s a Nokia and it’ll have a serial number. I’m sure it’d be possible to trace the owner, don’t you think?’

‘Probably.’ He pocketed the phone and thrust his hand into the shorts again; he drew out a handful of loose change and some large denomination notes of local currency,. ‘Not much else here to give us any clues, just some change and hundreds of rupees. Curious that there’s no car keys.’

‘Look, there’s a pair of sandals, expensive.’ She stood with hands on hips. ‘What shall we do?’ Her voice had a tone of despair.
‘We could just leave; take the money and run,’ he suggested. ‘Whatever it is, it’s none of our business, besides the tide will be rising now and by the look of the tide marks, the sea will claim the stuff within the next few hours anyway’.

‘Are you serious? We can’t just walk away.’ She spoke, surprised at his response; her sense of fairness and justice coming to the fore. ‘If there’s anything we can do we must do it now. We’ll take all the stuff and give it to the police, let them sort it out.’

He looked at her, expecting her to see how complicated this could get. She stared back at him. He spoke carefully to make sure she understood his thoughts. ‘Do you realise how complicated this could turn out to be Maria. We could be implicated; accessories after the fact and all that. It’s best we turn and walk away.’

‘No. We can’t do that Tom. I’d never forgive myself if it turned out that some crime or tragedy took place. No, we should gather all this up and give it to the police. Tell them exactly what we found,’ her lips pursed and her eyes bright with determination.
For a moment they stood looking down at the abandoned possessions. The wind found the gap between them.

Maria began gathering the possessions with anxious glances at the advancing waves. Tom scoured the beach again in both directions shielding his eyes from the lowering sun. They set off the way they had come but with an ungainly haste, treading awkwardly in the soft hot sand, Maria clutching the abandoned clothes under her left arm, Tom a few paces behind.

At the hotel door, pairs of shoes lay scattered as if abandoned on the steps, like boats adrift at sea. Maria plonked the folded clothes on the reception desk, breathless from the exertion, pleased to release them from her grasp. The clerk appeared from the back office.
‘Namaste,’ she greeted the clerk. ‘We must speak to the police. Can you show us how to find the police station, or can you phone for a policeman to come to the hotel, urgently’, she asked tapping the sun-hat on the top of the pile of possessions.

‘Namaste,’ the clerk replied. ‘Sorry Madam, I no understand. You want talk to police?’
‘Yes, can you telephone the police and ask them to come?’ Maria’s anxiety was enough for the clerk to realise there was a problem.

‘One moment madam.’ The clerk excused himself and disappeared into the back room. Maria turned and looked at Tom who shrugged his shoulders. ‘You should know by now that you can’t hurry anything in this country’, he cautioned.
Maria turned back to the reception desk as the clerk returned wringing his hands nervously.
‘Madam, I call police. Wait, please sit,’ the clerk gestured to the bright red sofa behind her. ‘Please sit. You want chai?’

Maria waved her hand to dismiss the offer and gathered up the possessions.

They both sat awkwardly on the long sofa, hands on knees like naughty school children. Neither spoke. Tom took the mobile phone from his pocket, examined it then clutched it in both hands between his knees. He checked the wall clock above the stair against his wristwatch. The ceiling fan struggled to have an effect on the heavy heat in the room. They waited.
In the back room the excited commentary of a cricket match on TV interfered with the silence. Maria suddenly felt they should have taken off their shoes at the door.

A short round moustachioed man in khaki uniform approached the door, stopped, slid off his polished black shoes and entered the foyer. He took a white handkerchief from his pocket and mopped his brow. The reception clerk gestured toward the couple on the sofa.
Maria stood up and offered her hand. ‘Namaste, thank you for coming. Can we go somewhere private?’ The policemen offered a limp hand without acknowledging the greeting or making eye-contact. Perhaps he wasn’t happy to be summoned in the heat of the afternoon.

A brief exchange between clerk and policeman concluded that the sofa was the only place to conduct business. Unless they went to their room, there was nowhere private to talk.
Keeping a respectful distance, the policemen lowered himself slowly on to the sofa. Maria turned to him and carefully related how they came upon the abandoned possessions on the beach. The policemen showed little interest until the Nokia phone was mentioned. Tom held up the phone. The policemen took it, examined it and put it in his breast pocket. He did the same with the money when Tom, with much fumbling, withdrew the cash from the pocket of his shorts.

The policeman stood up, spoke briefly in dialect to the clerk, turned and spoke with unexpected eloquence, to Tom. ‘This is a serious matter and I must act quickly. Time and tide seem to be against us, so to speak.’ He smiled weakly. ‘You have done the right thing calling the police. I will take the possessions and begin a formal enquiry. How long are you expecting to stay in our town?’
Tom looked at Maria then answered. ‘We have to leave in two days, we have made travel arrangements.’

‘Until then I know where to find you if there are questions.’ The policeman concluded and nodded at Tom. He bent to receive the abandoned items from Maria, lingering just long enough to make her conscious of her revealing open neck shirt. Tom stood up abruptly, his fists clenched; Maria immediately sensed his tension.
The policeman thanked them without offering his hand. He spoke gruffly to answer  a question from the clerk and left. The policemen located his black shoes from those others abandoned on the step, slipped them on and marched briskly up the street. Maria and Tom hurried away up the stairs to their room.

Once out of sight the policemen slowed. He slid into a narrow alley, stopped and drew a folded plastic shopping bag from his back trouser pocket. He quickly removed his khaki shirt, stuffed it in the bag with all the abandoned belongings, smiled to himself and stepped out. After some minutes, he turned into another alley and came to a small courtyard. He entered a narrow doorway and disappeared from sight.

In their hotel room, the ceiling fan whirred impatiently. They lay twisted and exhausted on the bed like bodies washed up on a beach.  
Maria expressed doubt about the outcome. ‘I don’t suppose we’ll hear anything from the police, do you? We’ll be gone by the time they make any progress, or I suppose until a body turns up. We did what we could after-all.’ She turned to Tom stretched out on the bed. She knew he was angry about something. ‘What else could we have done?’

‘You’re right. But we could have just walked away and left the stuff where we found it, like I said,’ he paused. ‘At least we got the lion’s share of the money, and the Oakleys.’
Maria gasped. ‘Tom, no. You didn’t!’

‘Oh yes I did. You didn’t think that was a policemen we spoke to, did you?’

If you have any comments, please let me know.

Saturday, 26 May 2012

MMIL's birthday photograph.


Some of you might remember my series of blogs entitled MMIL posted last autumn (2011)
Here is My Mother In Law on the day of her 84th birthday last week.
(about to be engulfed by a bouquet of floweres)
 Her house is near to being sold after a frustrating delay involving 2 prospective purchasers who kept us guessing only to fall at the final hurdle.
At last we hope we've found a sound purchaser and can proceed to
Exchange of Contracts sometimes soon.
MMIL's found a suitable flat near to where she is now. She can't wait to get out of that rambling house into something more manageable.
She's an amazing person!

Friday, 25 May 2012

Drawings, after Bhuj, Gujarat, India





Amongst many remarkable experiences during my Indian sojourn, it is the astonishing creativity of the tribal villagers north and east of Bhuj. The intricate free-form designs of the every day clothes of the women in the villages were a revelation to me. The use of vivid colours, abstract representation of domestic objects and the unbelievable sewing skills are of great significance to these rural peoples. I consider myself extremely fortunate to have visited villages, witnessed these extraordinary skills and glimpsed a way of life close to being overtaken by dramatic change.

I have been inspired to begin a series of drawings, which I title 'after Bhuj' where I am trying to understand the design aspects of the work, mostly of the Rabari tribe. As far as I was able to ascertain, the textile designs are created without a template or a drawing from which to refer; design and execution are based on using and repeating traditional motives in an free-form manner. Women work in pairs or small groups seated on the floor of their houses, chatting and occasionally referring to their work; this way techniques and traditions are maintained.

My drawings are done on pure white A4 cartridge paper, using Letraset Promarkers (a blast from the past as I remember those sheets of letraset we wrestled with on our drawings back in the early 1970's). Concentration is absolute, the mind working both to maintain a free flowing drawing style, thinking ahead the whole time about the next colour to use and where to take the design. I have over-marked with pencil to loosely indicate  sewing stitches. I'm getting better and enjoying it more.
 These three could be considered 'sketches'; I'm keen to begin work on a bigger scale, maybe A3 or A2. I'll see......

It's a pleasant surprise to recall that that day in April, in the company of Anna and
Vicktor from Portugal, Annie from France, visiting tribal villages, the breathtaking Great Rann of Kutchch and meeting remarkable people in Gujarat, should keep me company in my work room surrounded by paper and coloured markers on a chilly Spring day in England.

Tuesday, 15 May 2012

Published Writer, me?

Whilst away on the adventure to India, seeds sown have born fruit.
Two of my short stories have enjoyed so much that they have been published on the Net and one, in a collection of Short Stories.
You can imagine how excited I was to hear the news.

Rough Justice - a story of an unsolved murder of a British policeman in Punjab 1944.

The story was winner of the April competition at  www.writersbillboard.net  and published in on the website.
The same story was awarded an Honourable Mention in a Short Story competition by www.multi-story.co.uk and published on the Net

Through the Frosted Glass - a story about the homecoming of young airman from Bomber Command  in 1945

The story was runner-up in a short story competition at www.cazart.co.uk and published in a book of Short Stories available from the website

I can forward you a copy of the stories if you wish. tony.farmer88@gmail.com