Friday, 1 June 2012

A new Short Story




A new short Story.....


A Shirt from Paradise Blue
The sun began to change from a searing white globe to take on yellow and orange as it dipped towards the horizon. Two figures appeared in the distance walking along the wide, sandy beach without apparent purpose, occasionally stopping to examine something on the sand or to touch hands, to walk close together and then apart; a man and a woman. He, tall and dark, she shorter and blond, her hair cut short like a boy’s. They dressed alike in white shirts, khaki shorts and pale blue soft summer hats, shoes in hand. Chatting and laughing they approached. Suddenly the woman stopped, pointed and spoke urgently to her partner. She reached out and took his hand.

‘It is, look. It’s a pile of clothes and things,’ she said cautiously stepped forward, pulling him with her.
They stopped close enough to cast a shadow over the belongings.

‘So it is,’ he replied. They both looked around expecting to see someone on the beach or swimming in the surf. ‘There’re footprints in the sand, look,’ he said unclasping his hand and bending to examine the bare-foot prints.
‘Yes, leading away, along the beach. How curious?’ she said walking around the pile of clothes searching for some clue. ‘They haven’t been here long, look, there’s barely any wind-blown sand on them. Perhaps just a few hours.’

‘Well, there were no cars in the dunes car park when we arrived. I don’t remember seeing any prints in the sand as we walked. Why, you remarked that the beach was totally deserted’. He added, his voice revealing growing doubt. Tom liked things to be in the right place; he was a stickler for detail. ‘Look, here are some more footprints leading up from the sea.’
‘How very strange,’ she answered, looking over to Tom. ‘Should we look and see if there’s any identification, a wallet or something? I don’t suppose it’s the scene of a crime.’

‘We can’t very well not look,’ Tom replied and reached out to lift the hat, revealing black sunglasses, hiding in the shade. He picked them up. ‘Oakleys’. He put the hat on the sand and the glasses in the hat. He lifted the bright beach towel, shook it out and placed it on the sand next to the hat. He looked up along the beach and towards the surf for something, anything that might explain this collection of someone’s things.
Maria bent and picked up the shirt. ‘The shirt has a label From Paradise Blue. I’m sure it’s a man’s shirt.’ She held it up to flap in the wind, then thrust her nose into the garment. ‘Smells, clean.’

Tom picked up the khaki shorts and began to examine the pockets. ‘What have we here?’ he said withdrew his hand. ‘It’s a mobile phone, look.’ He held it up for her to see.
‘That’ll be helpful,’ she added.
He pressed the keypad several times but was unable to open the phone. ‘It’s out of juice!’
She moved closer to him. ‘Yes, but it’s a Nokia and it’ll have a serial number. I’m sure it’d be possible to trace the owner, don’t you think?’

‘Probably.’ He pocketed the phone and thrust his hand into the shorts again; he drew out a handful of loose change and some large denomination notes of local currency,. ‘Not much else here to give us any clues, just some change and hundreds of rupees. Curious that there’s no car keys.’

‘Look, there’s a pair of sandals, expensive.’ She stood with hands on hips. ‘What shall we do?’ Her voice had a tone of despair.
‘We could just leave; take the money and run,’ he suggested. ‘Whatever it is, it’s none of our business, besides the tide will be rising now and by the look of the tide marks, the sea will claim the stuff within the next few hours anyway’.

‘Are you serious? We can’t just walk away.’ She spoke, surprised at his response; her sense of fairness and justice coming to the fore. ‘If there’s anything we can do we must do it now. We’ll take all the stuff and give it to the police, let them sort it out.’

He looked at her, expecting her to see how complicated this could get. She stared back at him. He spoke carefully to make sure she understood his thoughts. ‘Do you realise how complicated this could turn out to be Maria. We could be implicated; accessories after the fact and all that. It’s best we turn and walk away.’

‘No. We can’t do that Tom. I’d never forgive myself if it turned out that some crime or tragedy took place. No, we should gather all this up and give it to the police. Tell them exactly what we found,’ her lips pursed and her eyes bright with determination.
For a moment they stood looking down at the abandoned possessions. The wind found the gap between them.

Maria began gathering the possessions with anxious glances at the advancing waves. Tom scoured the beach again in both directions shielding his eyes from the lowering sun. They set off the way they had come but with an ungainly haste, treading awkwardly in the soft hot sand, Maria clutching the abandoned clothes under her left arm, Tom a few paces behind.

At the hotel door, pairs of shoes lay scattered as if abandoned on the steps, like boats adrift at sea. Maria plonked the folded clothes on the reception desk, breathless from the exertion, pleased to release them from her grasp. The clerk appeared from the back office.
‘Namaste,’ she greeted the clerk. ‘We must speak to the police. Can you show us how to find the police station, or can you phone for a policeman to come to the hotel, urgently’, she asked tapping the sun-hat on the top of the pile of possessions.

‘Namaste,’ the clerk replied. ‘Sorry Madam, I no understand. You want talk to police?’
‘Yes, can you telephone the police and ask them to come?’ Maria’s anxiety was enough for the clerk to realise there was a problem.

‘One moment madam.’ The clerk excused himself and disappeared into the back room. Maria turned and looked at Tom who shrugged his shoulders. ‘You should know by now that you can’t hurry anything in this country’, he cautioned.
Maria turned back to the reception desk as the clerk returned wringing his hands nervously.
‘Madam, I call police. Wait, please sit,’ the clerk gestured to the bright red sofa behind her. ‘Please sit. You want chai?’

Maria waved her hand to dismiss the offer and gathered up the possessions.

They both sat awkwardly on the long sofa, hands on knees like naughty school children. Neither spoke. Tom took the mobile phone from his pocket, examined it then clutched it in both hands between his knees. He checked the wall clock above the stair against his wristwatch. The ceiling fan struggled to have an effect on the heavy heat in the room. They waited.
In the back room the excited commentary of a cricket match on TV interfered with the silence. Maria suddenly felt they should have taken off their shoes at the door.

A short round moustachioed man in khaki uniform approached the door, stopped, slid off his polished black shoes and entered the foyer. He took a white handkerchief from his pocket and mopped his brow. The reception clerk gestured toward the couple on the sofa.
Maria stood up and offered her hand. ‘Namaste, thank you for coming. Can we go somewhere private?’ The policemen offered a limp hand without acknowledging the greeting or making eye-contact. Perhaps he wasn’t happy to be summoned in the heat of the afternoon.

A brief exchange between clerk and policeman concluded that the sofa was the only place to conduct business. Unless they went to their room, there was nowhere private to talk.
Keeping a respectful distance, the policemen lowered himself slowly on to the sofa. Maria turned to him and carefully related how they came upon the abandoned possessions on the beach. The policemen showed little interest until the Nokia phone was mentioned. Tom held up the phone. The policemen took it, examined it and put it in his breast pocket. He did the same with the money when Tom, with much fumbling, withdrew the cash from the pocket of his shorts.

The policeman stood up, spoke briefly in dialect to the clerk, turned and spoke with unexpected eloquence, to Tom. ‘This is a serious matter and I must act quickly. Time and tide seem to be against us, so to speak.’ He smiled weakly. ‘You have done the right thing calling the police. I will take the possessions and begin a formal enquiry. How long are you expecting to stay in our town?’
Tom looked at Maria then answered. ‘We have to leave in two days, we have made travel arrangements.’

‘Until then I know where to find you if there are questions.’ The policeman concluded and nodded at Tom. He bent to receive the abandoned items from Maria, lingering just long enough to make her conscious of her revealing open neck shirt. Tom stood up abruptly, his fists clenched; Maria immediately sensed his tension.
The policeman thanked them without offering his hand. He spoke gruffly to answer  a question from the clerk and left. The policemen located his black shoes from those others abandoned on the step, slipped them on and marched briskly up the street. Maria and Tom hurried away up the stairs to their room.

Once out of sight the policemen slowed. He slid into a narrow alley, stopped and drew a folded plastic shopping bag from his back trouser pocket. He quickly removed his khaki shirt, stuffed it in the bag with all the abandoned belongings, smiled to himself and stepped out. After some minutes, he turned into another alley and came to a small courtyard. He entered a narrow doorway and disappeared from sight.

In their hotel room, the ceiling fan whirred impatiently. They lay twisted and exhausted on the bed like bodies washed up on a beach.  
Maria expressed doubt about the outcome. ‘I don’t suppose we’ll hear anything from the police, do you? We’ll be gone by the time they make any progress, or I suppose until a body turns up. We did what we could after-all.’ She turned to Tom stretched out on the bed. She knew he was angry about something. ‘What else could we have done?’

‘You’re right. But we could have just walked away and left the stuff where we found it, like I said,’ he paused. ‘At least we got the lion’s share of the money, and the Oakleys.’
Maria gasped. ‘Tom, no. You didn’t!’

‘Oh yes I did. You didn’t think that was a policemen we spoke to, did you?’

If you have any comments, please let me know.

Saturday, 26 May 2012

MMIL's birthday photograph.


Some of you might remember my series of blogs entitled MMIL posted last autumn (2011)
Here is My Mother In Law on the day of her 84th birthday last week.
(about to be engulfed by a bouquet of floweres)
 Her house is near to being sold after a frustrating delay involving 2 prospective purchasers who kept us guessing only to fall at the final hurdle.
At last we hope we've found a sound purchaser and can proceed to
Exchange of Contracts sometimes soon.
MMIL's found a suitable flat near to where she is now. She can't wait to get out of that rambling house into something more manageable.
She's an amazing person!

Friday, 25 May 2012

Drawings, after Bhuj, Gujarat, India





Amongst many remarkable experiences during my Indian sojourn, it is the astonishing creativity of the tribal villagers north and east of Bhuj. The intricate free-form designs of the every day clothes of the women in the villages were a revelation to me. The use of vivid colours, abstract representation of domestic objects and the unbelievable sewing skills are of great significance to these rural peoples. I consider myself extremely fortunate to have visited villages, witnessed these extraordinary skills and glimpsed a way of life close to being overtaken by dramatic change.

I have been inspired to begin a series of drawings, which I title 'after Bhuj' where I am trying to understand the design aspects of the work, mostly of the Rabari tribe. As far as I was able to ascertain, the textile designs are created without a template or a drawing from which to refer; design and execution are based on using and repeating traditional motives in an free-form manner. Women work in pairs or small groups seated on the floor of their houses, chatting and occasionally referring to their work; this way techniques and traditions are maintained.

My drawings are done on pure white A4 cartridge paper, using Letraset Promarkers (a blast from the past as I remember those sheets of letraset we wrestled with on our drawings back in the early 1970's). Concentration is absolute, the mind working both to maintain a free flowing drawing style, thinking ahead the whole time about the next colour to use and where to take the design. I have over-marked with pencil to loosely indicate  sewing stitches. I'm getting better and enjoying it more.
 These three could be considered 'sketches'; I'm keen to begin work on a bigger scale, maybe A3 or A2. I'll see......

It's a pleasant surprise to recall that that day in April, in the company of Anna and
Vicktor from Portugal, Annie from France, visiting tribal villages, the breathtaking Great Rann of Kutchch and meeting remarkable people in Gujarat, should keep me company in my work room surrounded by paper and coloured markers on a chilly Spring day in England.

Tuesday, 15 May 2012

Published Writer, me?

Whilst away on the adventure to India, seeds sown have born fruit.
Two of my short stories have enjoyed so much that they have been published on the Net and one, in a collection of Short Stories.
You can imagine how excited I was to hear the news.

Rough Justice - a story of an unsolved murder of a British policeman in Punjab 1944.

The story was winner of the April competition at  www.writersbillboard.net  and published in on the website.
The same story was awarded an Honourable Mention in a Short Story competition by www.multi-story.co.uk and published on the Net

Through the Frosted Glass - a story about the homecoming of young airman from Bomber Command  in 1945

The story was runner-up in a short story competition at www.cazart.co.uk and published in a book of Short Stories available from the website

I can forward you a copy of the stories if you wish. tony.farmer88@gmail.com




Tuesday, 24 April 2012

India doesnt stink

I seem to be moving further towards the rim of the sub-continent, sliding south into the sea. I began in Rajasthan, central, not the centre but close enough to the centre of the western part of this vast country to be landlocked; sea, massive mountain ranges and desert of sand or salt are it's boundaries. I'm due to arrive on the watery rim sometime tomorrow after nine hours couped up in a box on a sleeper coach not long enough to stretch out in.
By the time I arrive in Dwarka, birthplace of Gandhi and the more recently discovered site of Krishna's city before it was consumed by the sea. On record the town have been consumed by the sea five times. I hope my luck lasts. Once again a chapter ends and another begins.
Bhuj is a most interesting place and now Im departing I feel I should have stayed longer. I came to see for myself the astonishingly beautiful handiwork of the weavers and embroiderers of rural Kutchch, tribes of farmers and goat herders, fiercely proud of the design and workwomanship that defines a tribe. Some of this work, particularly of the Rabari tribe is astonishing in its conception. When talking to an 'expert (a man) he confirmed what I suspected that Rabari women imbibe substances when the embroiderer embroiders a narrative, otherwise how else could she so creatively interpret everyday tasks and objects like flowers, carrying goods on their heads and sweeping the floor. I suspect the 'song-lines' of their work has a relative in Aboriginal cultures
Together with travel friends, Anna and Vittor from Lisbon and Anie from Lyon we travelled north by car to visit the villages of Sumerasa, Bhirendiara, Kavda. We were never far from a military checkpoint, a reminder of the continuing tensions between India and Pakistan, which is just a few km's away to the north and east.
In the villages we were following a now established routine of being invited into the conical thatched roof houses with abstract painted walls and then to the 'shop' where some pretty aggressive selling went on; the women very much in control. We didn't buy and the charm was turned off, but we were encouraged to photograph at will. It's an inevitable sign of the times and by no means the case that the villagers have been totally commercialised; they continue to wear traditional costumes going about their daily work and are fiercely proud of their traditions.
In the far north of Kutchch we noticed a distinct change in the dress of men; not confined to boring shirts and trousers of the mainstream, most of the men in this area wear deep blue, green, lime, chocolate coloured tunics, long cortas, with matching pyjama pants and dashingly coloured loose scarves to protect against the dust and sand of this arid region. We were going too fast to photograph from the car. Policemen at the control points sport wicked moustaches; it's the law.
Before retracing our steps, we visited Kalo Dungar, an imposing mountain of 500m giving us a breathtaking panoramic view of the Great Rann of Kutchch, which for me ranks with the Straights of Hormoos in Oman as one of the works most exotic names. For zillions of square km this massive sea of salt stretches to infinity, home to Great Bustards, flamingos, wild assess and rare vultures.
Bhuj, the town is, unbelievably scruffy but honest. Its a working town of trucks and bazaars. There are two excellent museums, the quirky and precious Palace of Mirrors and the Museum of Kutchch, small yet displaying the full breadth of craft skills, particularly textiles, which make this area so fascinating.
In contrast to our freelance visit to the villages, on my last day I discovered a 'walled city' of craft. Twenty years or so ago, the Gujarati Government built a town of houses, parks and temples on the outskirts of Bhuj and persuaded traditional knife makers, carvers, weavers and of course embroiderere to establish communities based on tribe and craft. It's a bit prescriptive but it works. My unofficial guide, an auto-rickshaw driver, did his best to tell me about the experiment. We stopped a couple if times, had chai and chatted but his English was so difficult to grasp and his enthusiasm so irrepressible that I got no more than 10% of his information, said OK to 40% and gave up on the rest. But, the experience was well worth the effort. Such was his generous spirit, that he stopped to give a lift to the sweetest old woman wearing several kilos of gold who needed to get to her temple in a hurry. (see her visage below)
Here's a thought.
I had expected to be overwhelmed by the smells of India, yet when I reflect on many experiences, smell doesn't feature at all. This has been confirmed by several other travels I have chatted with. Yes, you can smell both sweet and foul, but it's a rare experience. Within 100m of where I sit, around the corner from the bazaar, is a farmyard about a big as my living room at home, where 6 cows munch cast-off veg, shit and get milked. This stinks for obvious reasons. Drains, piles of litter, outdoor latrines and clogged drains by and large do not register up my nose. It's just an idea that this might be because most of the India I have experienced, including dogs and cows, is vegetarian. Mmmmm, there's a thought.

Thursday, 5 April 2012

Looking back at Bijaipur

Happy memories of a special place, beautiful, serene and welcoming.